Friday, March 29, 2013

The Third Piece Of The Map

   Here's the final draft of the story! Enjoy!


3.5 Kilometers Under The Sea:

        Carl started anxiously rapping his fingernails on the metal dashboard as his sister gave him an irritated look.
        “What? Why are you looking at me like that?” Carl folded his hands in his lap. His sister turned her attention back to the radar.
        “You don’t need to be so worried Carl, you-“
        “My name is Doctor Howser.” Carl interrupted.
        “You don’t need to be so worried, Doctor Howser, you’ve been in plenty of submarines before. Why does this one have you so worried?” His sister finished.
        “Because we’ve never been so far down in the ocean before, Katie, we’re exactly 3.5 kilometers below sea level. Plus, this is the oldest, most out dated submarine I have ever laid my eyes on in my entire life!” Carl finished by burying his face in his sleeves.
        Katie adjusted her glasses and started typing on the keyboard that was embedded into the submarine dashboard. “We only have to stay down here for a few more hours. We’ve already survived for over 10 hours. I still don’t see why you’re so worked up about this.”
        Carl replied through his arms. “I don’t know, I just have a particularly bad feeling about this. This is the deepest trench we’ve ever been assigned to explore, and my ears have popped 20 times in the past 5 minutes. Plus, we’re almost out of water!”
        “Carl, are you even thirsty?”
        “No.”
        “Then forget about the shortage of water. If it will make you feel any better, I can start a timer counting down to the time when we start to resurface. Until then, just try to calm yourself down by categorizing any fish that you might see. We still have our research to do.”
        Carl sat up and pushed his shaggy brown hair out of his eyes. He looked at Katie for a long time, and he could tell she was trying not to look at him. He would never be able to understand how she hid her nervousness from him. That is, if she was even nervous at all.
        He stood up and walked over to the wall filled with book shelves, but only occupying notebooks and a few books about marine biology, although Carl could tell anyone everything that was in those book by heart. He picked up a notebook and a pencil, and he carried them over to a desk next to a window.
        Carl gulped and sat down. He opened his notebook and began to write what he saw, although the lack of light didn’t provide very good viewing conditions. None the less, he had 5 pages written after half an hour.
        While he was writing, Carl’s attention was drifting to a high pitched hissing sound. Soon, he couldn’t bear it any longer and began to look around for the source of the noise from his chair.
        “Katie, do you hear that?” Carl looked over at his sister, who had her nose buried in a book about fish.
        “Hear what?”
        “That hissing sound!”
        “No.”
        “Are you kidding me right now?”
        “No, Carl, it’s probably just your imagination.”
        “I don’t fantasize about hissing noises.”
        “I don’t’ want to know what you fantasize about, Carl, just get back to your studies.
        Carl turned back around and decided that his sister was probably right. He continued to tell himself this until he noticed that his feet suddenly felt icy cold and wet. Carl looked down to see about an inch of water covering the entire submarine floor.
        “KATIE! THERE’S WATER EVERYWHERE!” Carl screamed at the top of his lungs.
        “Calm down, Carl. I’m sure someone just spilled water or something.”
        “The water is rising! We didn’t even have this much water left! There’s a leak in the submarine somewhere! We have to find it! Hurry! Drop everything that you’re doing and help me find this leak! Grab some duct tape! Get some bandages! We have to fix this submarine before it implodes!” Carl was hyperventilating, and Katie just looked at him.
        “Well don’t just stand there! Help me find this leak!” Carl rocketed out of his chair and started splashing along the perimeter of the submarine.
        “You’re the older brother, so aren’t you supposed to be the calm and collected one?” Katie sat back in her chair.
        “You make me sick,” Carl gave Katie a sour look. “This is no time to be making jokes!” Carl bent over and gasped, “I found the leak.”
        In the side of the submarine closest to where Carl was sitting a few moments before, was a hole about the size of a dime. Water was being squirted through, and the hole was growing in size by the second. Soon it would be the size of a tennis ball.
        Carl ran over to the closet full of supplies they might need and snatched out two astronaut looking suits with air tanks strapped onto the back of them. Carl threw the smaller one at Katie, and quickly shoved himself into the larger one. He made sure not to turn the air tanks on while they were still in the submarine.
        Carl splashed over to where Katie was fumbling around with her suit and started typing frantically on the keyboard.
        “What are you doing?”
        “I’m contacting the control room. I’m telling them that there’s a breech in out sub. I’m telling them our coordinates and that they need to send a backup submarine as soon as possible. Why don’t you have your emergency suit on yet?” Words were tumbling out of Carl’s mouth like commands but his tone was too scared for them to be taken like real orders.
        “I’m trying to get it on but it’s just so bulky.”
        “Remember not to activate your air tanks until we get out of the submarine.”
        “We’re leaving the submarine?”
        “We have to. If we don’t leave soon the hole submarine will collapse in on us.”
        “Won’t the pressure of the water crush us out there?”
        “Not if you put of your suit right.”
        “You’re not being serious are you?”
        Carl looked straight at Katie with the most serious and terrified look that he’d ever wore on his face. “I wish I wasn’t.”
        Carl grabbed Katie’s hand splashed over to the pressure door. Katie squeezed his hand. Carl took a thick metal bar from the side of his suit and attached it to Katie’s. Carl turned the wheel on the door three times before the door was knocked open by highly pressured ocean water.
***
        When Carl finally got worked up the courage to open his eyes, the only thing he could see through the little bubble of glass in his suit was blackness. That and Katie, who’s eyes were still closed.
        Carl pushed the green button in the side of his helmet that connected the air tanks to the rest of the suit. Then he pushed a red button that enabled communication between the two suits: Carl’s and Katie’s.
        “Can you hear me, Katie?”
        “Yes.”
        “Good, now open your eyes.”
        “I don’t want to.”
        “You have to. You’ll die if you don’t.”
        “What? Why?”
        “Because you have to press the green button that releases the air from your air tanks into your suit.”
        “Oh.” Katie opened her eyes and pressed the green button on the side of her helmet. “I don’t see anything but blackness.”
        “That’s because we’re so far under water.”
        “My ears are popping more than they were in the submarine.”
        “That’s because now they’re more exposed to the pressure of the water.”
        Now that Carl thought about it, the water pressure was having a lot of effect on him as well. His ears popped about 15 times a minute, he felt that the water was trying to squeeze his body into a tiny ball, and every time he took a breath, his lungs felt like they were going to collapse.
        “When will the backup submarine get here?” Katie looked at Carl with wide eyes.
        “How long did it take our submarine to get down to this coordinate?”
        “About two hours.” Katie stated. Carl sighed with frustration.
        “Then that’s how long from now it will take the backup submarine to get here.”
        “So what you’re telling me is that we have to just float here like this for two hours?” Katie started to panic.
        “Yes. Or we could try swimming straight up so that it will take less time for the backup submarine to meet up with us.” Carl tried to reassure her with a backup plan that he knew probably wouldn’t work. The suits would be so heavy for him and Katie that by time they had swum up about 10 feet, they’d get so tired that they would have to stop swimming. That would make them sink back down to where they started or maybe even further down.
        Although, if they just stayed where they were now, they might sink as well because of the weight of the suits. For all Carl knew, they could be sinking right now. There were no landmarks to watch to see if they were getting farther away from them, there was just blackness.
        Despite all of these facts, Carl decided not to mention anything to Katie.
        “I like that plan better.”
        “Okay, then we should probably start swimming.” Carl started to kick his feet, and with every movement of his suit, he could feel his muscles screaming for a break.
        “I don’t know how well this is going to work out for us, Katie.” Carl said after about 5 minutes of unprogressive thrashing. “In fact, if we’ve accomplished anything by doing this, it would be to attract a predator.”
        When Carl saw Katie’s eyes widen with fear at that statement, he quickly added, “Not that anything could get through these suits.” Carl knew it was a lie. He also knew that Katie knew it was a lie as well. Despite this, Katie looked a tad bit calmer.
***
        It had been an hour and 45 minutes. Both Carl and Katie’s muscles ached. They’re stomachs were rumbling. They both longed for some water. They were chilled to the bone.
        Carl didn’t know how much time had passed by, but he did know that the backup sub should be arriving soon. He decided he would pass the remaining time by talking to his sister.
        “How’re you holding up, Katie?” Carl’s voice was filled with genuine concern.
        “I’m fine.” Carl knew Katie didn’t want to talk about their situation.
        Five more minutes passed.
        “You know, the backup submarine should be here soon.” Carl tried to cheer Katie up, but he could tell by Katie’s lack of response and her facial expression that she was traumatized.
        “I won’t let anything happen to you, Katie, I promise.” Carl vowed. Katie didn’t look at him.
        10 more minutes passed.
        A bright light coming from above them pierced through the darkness. Both Katie and Carl looked up. A large submarine was making its way towards them. Carl immediately started swimming towards the machine but Katie stood frozen. She was paralyzed.
        The huge submarine stopped its decent when it was a few feet away from them. A secured door opened and two men in suits like Katie and Carl’s started swimming towards them. One grabbed Katie and started swimming back towards the submarine. The other came to Carl, and he let the man drag him towards the submarine. Carl was exhausted.
***
        Carl hung his wet suit in the closet of the backup submarine. He walked over to the chair facing Katie’s. One of the assistants was wrapping her in a blanket. Katie didn’t move. She really had been traumatized by this.
        Carl stood up and walked over to his sister. He wrapped his arms around her, and as soon as he did, Katie burst into choked sobs.
        “Hey, it’s alright Katie-Bug.” Carl tried to sooth her.
        “I didn’t think we were going to make it.” Katie could barely talk.
        Carl stroked his sister’s hair. “But we did. We did make it. And now we’re on our way home. Everything’s alright now.
        They stayed like that for about an hour; brother and sister comforting and reassuring one another. In about another hour, they would be back on the land, and Katie would never step into another submarine again.
        

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