Tuesday, March 26, 2013

Getting Back On The Road

Alright, its time for some of my poetry! Here's a look at some of my sappy sonnets:
sonnets about fate:

its all about fate; your destiny
use it to see; to navigate your dreams

let yourself go
stand on the street, look out into the world that pushes you to be someone you're not, and disagree.

get into something you love
be a part in somebodies fate as well as your own.
don't let people bring you down, and pity those who try to;
they don't understand true purpose and meaning, live your own life.

the only crowd you should be proud to be a part of are the dreamers and the visionaries.

don't like your options?
create your own opportunities.
don't be afraid to speak; don't whisper, be heard
shout out to the skies.
let the stars hear what your heart really beats for.

don't be afraid to claim what you've worked so hard for.

sonnets about New York:

once your plane lands, take your life into your own hands
and let no one screw it up because this is what you've worked so hard for

stand on your own two feet
make your own path
take a look around you

remember everything
don't miss a moment
suitcase full of dreams
city full of magic

snow flakes on your nose
cold feeling all the way down to your toes
that excitement everybody knows

Okay, I think that's enough to let you guys see my sonnet writing style! Remember: I am ALWAYS looking for some helpful writing pointers! help me by letting me know what you think! Thanks!

6 comments:

Unknown said...

i have some more that i might share if i get any good feedback

Unknown said...

Oh, and sorry about the mistake. These are not sonnets!! They are just short poems!! Sorry for the confusion! My bad!!

Anonymous said...

This so great alonna! I'm so proud of you!

Unknown said...

Thanks so much for your support Nicole *wink wink*

Anonymous said...

You're welcome, anytime! You are great at this keep going babe(:

Unknown said...

Thanks! I will tomorrow!